Mushkil si raho mein din raat chalta hu
Bar bar girta hu bar bar sambhalta hu
Khwabo ki umeed me raato ko nikalta hu
Suraj ko dekh subah chand sa pighalta hu
Naumeed nahi haar se, phir koshish karta hu
khali nahi vishwas se, phir sapne dekhta hu
bikharne per takleef hui to kya
phir tukdo ko jodta hu, phir talaash karta hu
Asaan si wo raah mujhper meherbaan kab hui hai
Manzil ki mehek yuhi kadr-daan kab hui hai
apne mehnat ke fal ko ab hasil karke hi rahunga
A gaya hu mehfil me to geet gaa kar hi uthunga
A gaya hu mehfil me to geet gaa kar hi uthunga
9 comments:
Your best creation till date.... Keep it up dewarji...
oye is this really written by you?? Suddenly my respect towards you has grown manifold!! :D
And yes....you have come a long way from the "pen is mightier than sword" days! ;)
~ adit
@Lakshmi bhabhi
Thank you... i think your encoragements will end up making me something some day:D
@Adit Sir
you know what sir, it was you who made me think that i can actually write... remember how u were hell bent on publishing 'the pen is mightier than sword' I was moved by your faith in me
you have the ability to inspire the uninspired... a much greater skill than writing...
Thanks for your comments
Kinshu
zabardast!!
Sid Csy
dude, didnt read your poem yet...mast hi hogi looking at the comments....lekin I remember the pen being mightier than the sword.
keep blogging away...change the name to "being a kenchua"
I am impressed! :)
Very inspiring & witty!
goodjob dude.
hey bhai .. its an awesome creation ..
it has inspired me
love
shreya
kya baat kya baat !!
You said you are not comfortable with hindi..cudnt figure out how...:)
Do Keep writing I am sure you will go miles ahead..
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