So dark the con of man...
Well, we all have secrets... dont we?
For as far along as I can remember, I have lived with one or the other. And it has not been easy. So now, with a lot of courage, I am finally warming up to the fact that it’s ok to have a few uncharted territories... for the larger good of mankind...
Sometimes I want to close my eyes
Let my heart decide where I go
But then I think of the times long gone
When I just wouldn’t know
Sometimes I want to walk that mile
And see how it would go
See what I would do when the moment comes
Of which, I am so unsure...
Perhaps it too shall pass my being
If I just go with the flow
Perhaps it will sweep my feet away
To a place, dreaded and unknown
Or perhaps, I would never go that way
Where my heart wants me to go
Will I survive, will I drown
Perhaps I would never know...
Some things are better left untouched
Some truths too hard to swallow
For as long as I shall be here
I shall wait for you to follow...
11 comments:
Poem depicts skepticm very well n consistently.
With each stanza, it causes more pessimism which goes with the theme and provides reason for insecurity in a man.
thats skepticism up there
Thanks to all your nagging.. here's my comment :) in black n white..
Every word mirrors the person you are.. and a word of advice..
"Do not tread the unknown waters
If they seem so dark,
For the path you follow today
Is the one you ought to embark.. "
@apu - smhow I knew u'ld say that...
thanks.. see my nagging works :)
Nice one. Keep writing. I appreciate your efforts to write this but I respect more for understanding what not to write and leave them untouched.
Har sach zaban par khoobsoorat nahin lagta ey vibhaas,
Kayi hote hain paida, sirf dafan ho jane ke liye…
Sometimes the life does remain like a web.. a web of ifs.. You imagine and romanticise what is not known, for everyone has told you that the forbidden pleasures are sinful.
So should you give in and let go? But are you ready for the revelation? Can you say for sure that that you would have the courage to face the place where the heart takes you?
Keep checking, the sounds that you think are that of someone following you, might just be your wishful thinking. Maybe, just maybe.. you're alone.
@Anon..
Cudn't have expected a better comment on this. thanks. m a little lesser afraid now, for i know m not alone...
btw - think u liked my smart promotional stunts ;)
Now that's a Nice one Champ ...
Ankush
Ankush
- thanks :)
how many miles...??? :-)
beautifully written !!
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